My spirit
When in a life, where spirits meet, I wasWhen in a life, where spirits meet, I wasI reached for all the spirits and beholdBut now as all of them will blindly passI, in the shadow, keep my awe...
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Leg--You're showing an increased familiarity with what the form can do. I gladly grant you that. For someone writing in a language that is not their own, you have taken on the difficult task of...
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Mike,i was waiting to be butchered herei was reluctant to read the commentbut i am glad i didit kind of relieves me it seems that i am using expressions i alreadu heard about, but unintentionallyit is...
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Leg--I am glad you took my critique as intended, & applaud your determination to be a better writer. Everyone who posts here hopefully shares the same intent -- & needs the same goad ("a kick...
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Mike,As for me, i like the works of Musset and Lamartineunfortunately i haven't read for Goethe, though maybe one day i willi have not been writing for a while, getting feedback on my previous work.i...
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